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作者: 苏菲 时间: 2013-1-5 20:30
标题: 失眠
本帖最后由苏菲于 2013-1-5 20:38 编辑

[广东]苏菲

失眠

月光透过天窗
撒了一地……

不知是两杯咖啡的威力
还是黄昏的小憩

夜已深沉
一年的旧事如滔滔江水
奔涌而来

似乎有惊涛骇浪
拍打着我的窗

思维在枕上辗转
却无法预知下一刻
梦将游向何方

3:30 2012-11-26

[Guangdong] Sophy Chen

Sleeplessness

Moonlight through the window

Is spreading on the ground...

I don't know it’s the power of two cups of coffee

Or an evening nap

It’s in deep night

A year’s old story as if a surging river

That rushes towards me

It seems like the stormy seas

which Is flapping on my window

Though my mind is tossing on the pillow

I can not predict the next moment

Where my dream will swim to

Tr.Sophy Chen

作者: 苏菲 时间: 2013-1-5 20:41
本帖最后由苏菲于 2013-1-5 20:42 编辑

Hi,
My friends ,
This is my new poem both in Chinese and English and i wish you love it !

Sophy

作者: 郁序新 时间: 2013-1-6 20:42

苏菲发表于 2013-1-5 20:41
Hi,
...

Very good bilingual poem, I appreciate it !

感谢你的加入！我们是新浪的老朋友了吧！ Remember me Tulip.

作者: 苏菲 时间: 2013-1-7 22:51
Thanks,Sir!

I know you , sure, in Sina.com
I am so nice to meet you here !
I appreciate yours , too!

Sophy

作者: 清穆 时间: 2013-1-8 15:29
Sleeplessness

Through the trapdoor moonlight spreads
All over the floor...

I wonder whether it's the power of
Two cups of coffee, or
A nap at nightfall

Deep down in night,
Bygones of the year run over me
Like the roaring river

It seems there were surging waves
Flapping my window

I had thoughts tossing and turning on pillow
Yet still, I was unable to predict that, next moment
Where will my dream swim toward

一时兴起，英译了一首。多多指教。
Hope you don't mind.And hope you like it.

作者: 苏菲 时间: 2013-1-8 18:03
Thanks Sir!

Thank you for your translation on my rough Chinese poem
I love your English version so much !
Thank you again !

作者: 郁序新 时间: 2013-1-9 10:37

苏菲发表于 2013-1-7 22:51
Thanks,Sir!

I know you , sure, in Sina.com

Hi Sophy, It's my pleasure to invite you to join us. I am sure your English and Chinese poems will be warmly welcome here. Best wished to you and happy new year!

拙译原玉，请斧正！

Insomnia

Moonlight through the skylight
Scatters over the floor…

I am not aware that if it’s the energy
Of two cups of coffee
Or a nap at dusk

It’s in the midnight
All things of the past year surge toward me
Like roaring torrents

It seems as if a violent storm
Slapped my window

My thought is flipping on the pillow
Yet I can’t foretell, the next moment
Where my dream will drift

2013年1月9日
Translated by Tulip

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