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作者: 忍淹留 时间: 2012-2-4 21:05
标题: 英译红山诗社冻土诗
本帖最后由忍淹留于 2012-2-4 21:06 编辑

The wall

When I was coming

without any clothes

I didn't see the wall

Put on the clothes

my heart moved and so did the wall

wind was running over the water

when I was leaving

without any clothes

no wall was there which meant it was

there was the wall as it wasn't

这面墙

冻土

来时

没穿衣裳

没见这面墙

穿上衣裳

心动墙也动

风行在水上

走时

没了衣裳

无墙即是有墙

有墙便是无墙

作者: 张无为 时间: 2012-2-5 15:31
这首代表作很精炼。

作者: 忍淹留 时间: 2012-2-5 17:59

白希群发表于 2012-2-5 16:26
这首翻译难度应该不小吧？

确实很费脑筋的。

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