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作者: 苏菲    时间: 2016-1-27 16:01
标题: 苏菲英汉双语诗歌《这三天、啥也不想干》入选(中国诗歌网)每日好诗评选名单
苏菲英汉双语诗歌《这三天、啥也不想干》入选(中国诗歌网)每日好诗(第10期)评选名单,名列前三呀!感谢“中国诗歌网”的编辑们,你们辛苦了。正如美国诗人评论家,丹尼尔•布瑞克说的那样,他在“苏菲诗歌&翻译网”阅读了苏菲所有原创诗歌之后,他唯独挑出了这首《这三天,啥也不想干》In These Three Days, I Don't Want to Do Anything,他说这是苏菲诗歌中,最值得他写评论的诗。并且对我说,他要就这首诗,写5000字的英语诗歌评论。我回答说,谢谢老师,如果你写了,我一定竭尽所能,立刻翻译成汉语,让全世界爱热诗歌的读者都读到你写的评论。对于一个用英语写诗歌的中国人来说,能得到英语本族语评论家的首肯,是一个中国人无比的骄傲和无尽的动力。这首诗在“苏菲诗歌&翻译网”首发之后,收到许多读者朋友单独发来的祝福和简短评论,这些读者大多是不写诗歌的读者,他们激动的告诉我:谢谢苏菲,太好了,你终于写了一首好诗,让大家都读得懂的好诗。以后就这么写,写让我们读的懂得好诗。
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In These Three Days, I Don’t Want to Do Anything
— When a person cannot be found, you’ll find how wonderful the past life together was
By Sophy Chen


In these three days, I don’t want to do anything
I only want to lie in your heatable brick bed
I don’t want to read English
In the morning
I only want to lie in your heat-able brick bed, and look at you making
Chinese pollen tea, no sugar, a cup by a cup, you drink, I drink
Putting more coal!
Mindless of the nice snowflakes outside the cave dwelling
In these three days,
I don’t want to write poems
I only want to lie in your heat-able brick bed, and look at you cooking, morning,
The sweet millet porridge for me, with a small plate of self-made pickled vegetable,
Noon, buckwheat noodles, night, mutton soup …
Putting coal again!
Mindless of thick snow and strong wind outside the cave dwelling
In these three days,
I don’t want to translate poems
I only want to lie in your heat-able brick bed, and to listen to you tell your love story
Or from time to time, I just boast out
What I have done in English language
Putting more coal again!
Mindless of the heavy snow sealed mountains and blocked the road ahead outside
In these three days,
I really don’t want to do anything
I even don’t want to teach English, open my computer,
Phone calls, and read short massages in Weibo, or Weixin
Just let the heavy snow sealed mountains and cut down anything which can touch me
One thing that I desperately want to do is to wait and look you cooking delicious food for me —
Morning, pollen tea, the millet porridge, noon, buckwheat noodles, night, mutton soup …

2015-04-23     10:16   Xiao Gu Wei Island


  

《这三天,啥也不想干》
—— 一个人,只有无法找寻时,才发现相处的时光多么美好
苏菲

这三天,啥也不想干
只想躺在你那土炕上
清晨
不想读英语
只想躺在你那土炕上,看着你,
做花粉茶,不放糖,一杯,一杯,我喝,你也喝
多加点煤
窑洞外,雪花多美也不管
这三天,
我不想写诗
只想躺在你那土炕上,看着你,
做香喷喷的小米粥,外加一碟你亲手腌制的小咸菜,
中午,荞麦面节节,晚上,羊肉汤。。。。。。
再加点煤
窑洞外,雪再厚,风再大也不管
这三天,
我不想译诗
只想躺在你那土炕上,听你讲述爱情故事
或者,时不时,也自吹自擂
说说自己在英语语言里干了些什么
再多加点煤
窑洞外,大雪封山,阻断前路也不管
这三天,
实在什么也不想干
甚至不想,教授英语、开电脑、
开手机、看,微博,微信
就让大雪封山,切断一切联系
唯有一件,最想,就是,看着你,等着你,做最可口的饭菜——
早晨,花粉茶,小米粥,中午,荞麦面节节,晚上,羊肉汤。。。。。。


(苏菲英汉对照诗歌原创) 2015-04-23     10:16   小谷围岛





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