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作者: 俞伟远    时间: 2016-5-11 09:30
标题: 黑蛇
黑蛇

玛丽.奥利弗(美国)

早晨的路面,
那条黑蛇闪现
而卡车不能转向避开
死亡,就这样发生。

现在他躺着,蜷曲无用
像一只旧自行车轮胎
我停下车
把它送入灌木丛。

他冰凉闪光
像一根编织的鞭子,他美丽安静
像一位死去的兄弟。
我把它安放在树叶下

继续开车,想着
死亡:它的突兀,
它可怕的重量,
它不可避免的来临。然而

理性之下,燃着更明亮的火苗,那是
骨头一直喜欢的。
那是好运连绵的故事。
它对忘却说:不是我!

那是每个细胞核心的光。
它派遣黑蛇在整个春天快乐地向前
卷绕游动穿过绿色树叶
在它来到这条路之前

2015/9/17翻译练习

作者: 叶如钢    时间: 2016-5-11 11:01
The  Black Snake

Mary Oliver

When the black snake
flashed onto the morning road,
and the truck could not swerve--
death, that is how it happens.

Now he lies looped and useless
as an old bicycle tire.
I stop the car
and carry him into the bushes.

He is as cool and gleaming
as a braided whip, he is as beautiful and quiet
as a dead brother.
I leave him under the leaves

and drive on, thinking
about death: its suddenness,
its terrible weight,
its certain coming. Yet under

reason burns a brighter fire, which the bones
have always preferred.
It is the story of endless good fortune.
It says to oblivion: not me!

It is the light at the center of every cell.
It is what sent the snake coiling and flowing forward
happily all spring through the green leaves before
he came to the road.

   

作者: 叶如钢    时间: 2016-5-11 11:03
本帖最后由 叶如钢 于 2016-5-11 11:13 编辑

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作者: 俞伟远    时间: 2016-5-11 15:07
谢谢鼓励!以后把原作与翻译一起贴出。敬请朋友们多多指教!
作者: 叶如钢    时间: 2016-5-18 02:45
提起
作者: 俞伟远    时间: 2016-5-25 14:02
谢谢叶如钢先生鼓励




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