中文部分做如下照应，或可强些 
汉 诗《 过 年 》英 译《 Celebrate the Chinese New Years 》
过 年
—— 原 著 / 李世纯 - 中国 长春 - 2021 - 除夕誌
Celebrate the Chinese New Years
—— by Li Shichun / Changchun City, China - feb. 11, 2021
少小过年
老大过情
It's no more the Spring Festival for me
But a sort of Emotions as older grown
如其岁岁年韵淡
其若年年情愈浓
It's not so much fading the Festival's air
As stronger my Emotions go with years
朝夕三百六十五
亲人惟聚寐眠中
For days and nights of the number years
At no time but in sleep Relatives get reunien：
爆竹声尽可再燃
惊去双亲复梦难
The firecrackers may well get relit when their voices dying
But Parents startled off would rarely return into my dream
但信团圆有正果
同世何日不过年
If only it comes true that we're in the same world
Whenever for me was'nt the Chinese New Year ?
但信团圆有正果
同世何日不过年
If only it comes true that we're in the same world
Whenever for me was'nt the Chinese New Year ?
和 爸 爸 妈 妈 过 年，
我 要 和 爸 爸 妈 妈 过 年！
Let me have these Spring Festivals
Together with my Mom and Dad！
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