请懂英文的朋友帮忙检查 网友为我翻译的诗歌 我学习不用功,书到用时方狠少啊,为了中国云诗歌走向世界,特意请网友“天上的云”帮忙翻译了一首诗歌,请懂英文的朋友批评指点,不胜感谢。 翻译作者:天上的云 母亲啊 请闭上您的眼睛
5 m3 s" h7 ^& u2 H1 P3 X9 P(Mom, please close your eyes)
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+ h: O, h: Y6 G- o* {, T我在白云村日夜忙碌母亲瘫痪后的事4 n, `3 _/ f/ U, v
I am busying in looking after my paralyzed mother day and night in BaiYun Village
% Z* o+ [) {0 M, r- V看每日农经 种植尽可能致富的植物
% Q S, `& U& T& dStudy agronomy daily and planting economic plants as much as possible to get -rich-quick' R$ H) e$ E4 K
村庄容得下我奔小康的梦想吗, u% g$ I* X5 f- [: n4 {
Would the village accommodate my fairly well-off dream?
: _8 H' ?( P, P4 u9 z我跟石头一样咬紧贫穷的牙关
1 [6 b/ w/ k# B n' t9 |I set my impoverished teeth as stone' [! E/ l+ v, J0 \4 |
和妻子在石头间挖掘美好幸福的阳光* A# f9 w. T/ z% a5 a
Mining the beautiful sunshine with my wife amongst the stones
& W( N" f W; q3 Z& Z# l我们把未来的小楼房都设计好了
. u. c+ {" ~* P6 C% ]& M# QOur small building for the future is well designed
, P& O3 ?# I8 l2 j需要有明亮的窗户来盛装东方斜射的光明
$ C% r" k: l* u7 x8 ] D5 JHaving bright windows to contain eastern oblique light$ \ f, ~2 O& q4 e+ Q* n$ ~1 C
这样母亲就能感受到春天的温暖) m+ p- P5 }, o% W4 Z
So that my mom can feel the warmth of spring 僵硬的母亲像一只蜷缩的茧: }- T0 s. D9 @! \2 v
Mom lying like a curled up cocoon( S: T" P, O( W
她病床对面空着父亲躺过的床
) }7 v: D' L) E2 ? B( q/ COpposite to an empty bed of my father ever
( \ P0 N0 o" j; h0 ~: A+ B( m母亲像被烧过的锡纸眼角挂着凝重的眼霜2 ~3 D& o0 P! _! f4 P
Like a burnt tinfoil hung with solemn eye-cream in her canthus/ Q$ K4 d: W$ w3 C. A" o5 u
我知道您病得不轻啊谁又能拯救呢
) Z# D9 h* V$ U( aI know you are very ill, while who can save you?% ]# Z- e! q& q' g# V3 j* k
呵我亲爱的母亲您迷离的目光有如刀枪
% j: d: G; y& n' xOh, my dear Mom, your blurred eyes like a sword
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几年过去了 我一直没有修好我们的房子
% [# W8 R" }3 Y( W7 G( H% |Over the years I cannot build up our house' T- _# }) U0 y3 v0 p. g
我们夫妻俩多少回蒙头流泪
! b2 _7 s# Y" f- ^How many tears we wept hooded in bed
. \6 x9 ^' d5 p8 [5 @* `在您隔壁的子夜里我们听到了您的哭泣/ Z( K2 }. o" y1 O& X: x' j
We heard you cry in the midnight on your next door1 u( G/ @, M# O( n$ W/ L U
我们不敢注视您的眼睛啊6 d/ Z9 m& [# m
We dare not look into your eyes; q7 _. T8 L" t# ?6 ^$ V
因您的病不可救药 神明也束手无策* V8 }, Z$ y( ~* n, x4 i
Because of your illness is far beyond remedy, . ]* U2 J- C$ M
even god can do nothing 来看望您的人都用善意的谎言祝福您早日康复
; ?% ]/ r8 Q! c2 { P7 A5 ^People come to see you with well-meaning crammer wishing you a speedy recovery
9 p6 a- E4 N. |7 t& x4 O我却希望您早一天把眼睛闭上" \) D* Y D7 V8 N/ @& o
I hope you close your eyes even one day earlier2 ?! R- ~$ L" }, u, P4 K! o+ A
闭上您的眼睛就等于打开了无垠的蓝天
( g5 U1 L6 C' _8 E: A( a. xClose your eyes is equal to open the boundless blue sky; ]( |1 k& B- M* H
闭上您的眼睛吧 母亲
a1 ]/ R6 r- U- q2 fPlease close your eyes, Mom
n" u4 O9 ?8 X* c闭上您的眼睛我和妻子就可以用奶嘴哺育您的来生
+ A; b, Q5 A! DClose your eyes so my wife and I can use the nipple feeding your eternity |