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Late autumn morning

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楼主
发表于 2018-10-20 23:46 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式

The sunlight is still bright but lesser
Than those in the summer dawns
The temperature still rises but weaker
And slower like it was haunted
The coldness was sent by the wind with the rustling sound
Green has still remained on the leaves of the grass though
but on their tips yellow and dryness has already hung

Frost looked cold and shining off-screen white            
Birds sang irresistibly  but felt a bit numb
while the wind plumed harp tune high

Time is as spacious as earth or sky         
But the dreams cannot  be exactly kept         
Wild goose start to go their southern home
By making an array fly

Someone like me in their middle ages
Will  face the desolate circumstances
Just as said by that late autumn morning  


阳光依然明亮,
却敌不过初夏晨光
气温升无力
簌簌秋风
呈一抹寒凉,
草色依然绿,叶尖却焦黄,
挂淡淡白霜
风抚羽琴急,鸟儿唱愁
天地空旷容不下昨梦
在这个晚秋的早晨
仰天看苍茫,雁阵行行
冬即来,人凄凄
中年时光里,
堪比这晚秋草木
将面对晚景凄凉
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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2018-10-21 11:15 | 只看该作者
The sunlight is still bright but lesser
Than those in the summer dawns
The temperature still rises but weaker
And slower like it was haunted
The coldness was sent by the wind with the rustling sound
Green has still remained on the leaves of the grass though
but on their tips yellow and dryness has already hung

Frost looked cold and shining off-screen white            
Birds sang irresistibly  but felt a bit numb
while the wind plumed harp tune high

Time is as spacious as earth or sky         
But the dreams cannot  be exactly kept         
Wild goose start to go their southern home
By making an array fly

Someone like me in their middle ages
Will  face the desolate circumstances
As the late autumn morning  said
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板凳
发表于 2018-10-23 12:03 | 只看该作者
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这个题目该如何正确理解?
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地板
 楼主| 发表于 2018-10-23 14:37 | 只看该作者
李世纯 发表于 2018-10-23 14:03
Late autumn morning [复制链接]

就是几个词的排列
注意信息量
世纯觉得用个什么题目好? 愿听高论。
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