I...

柔丝君

《I...》

I am poor, but no that poor.

I am rich, but no that rich.

I am lonely, but not that lonely.

I am happy, but not that happy.


I'm your angel, you will hear me.

I'm your sweetheart, you would believe thy.

I say it loudly, don't be afraid.

I'm in love with, don't you see?


注：《我...》英文简译。（这是我的一首英文小诗）

我贫穷，但不是那种贫穷。

我富有，但不是那种富有。

我孤独，却不是那样的孤独。

我幸福，却不是那样的幸福。

我是你的天使，你会听到我的声音。

我是你的甜心，你要相信你的心灵。

我大声把它说出，请你不要害怕。

我在爱着，你有没有看到？

山水如歌

I am poor, but no that poor.

I am rich, but no that rich.

I am lonely, but not that lonely.

I am happy, but not that happy.

that poor.
that rich.
that lonely.
that happy.

poor 好像是形容词。
This, that, these and those are demonstratives. We use this, that, these and those to point to people and things. This and that are singular. These and those are plural. We use them as determiners and pronouns.

不知在英语诗歌里，可不可以反语法。个见，问好！

问好！

采凤

好地方

柔丝君

采凤 发表于 2017-3-13 20:22
好地方

谢谢朋友来访这偏远小地。问好了。

采凤

柔丝君 发表于 2017-3-13 20:39
谢谢朋友来访这偏远小地。问好了。

不错奥
羡慕来不及呢

叶如钢

欢迎诗友。

有意思的小诗。

英文版有的句子有语法问题。

柔丝君

叶如钢 发表于 2017-3-14 08:45
欢迎诗友。

有意思的小诗。

谢谢了。祝愉快！