【汉译英】关于叶如钢老师，韩庆成总编同坐和谐号两首

紫色的云

◎By CRH with Qingcheng Han

          By: Rugang Ye

The darkness in the tunnel was so long...
We did see the light in the end！
But it disappeared  immediately.

The darkness lasted so long again...
But surely it would be more brilliant soon！

◎By CRH from YiChang East to Enshi

        By: Qingcheng Han

Between the two tunnels,
Bright light was fleeting...

As if we were walking down underground;
As if the darkness was for ever

2016.06.03  紫紫（译）


附叶如钢，韩庆成诗歌原文：


1.与韩庆成总编同坐“和谐号”

      文/叶如钢

隧道黑暗如此之久...
终于看到光明！
但光明一瞬即逝。

隧道黑暗又如此之久...
但必有更光明的一瞬!

2. 坐“和谐“号
从宜昌东到恩施

    文/韩庆成

两个隧道之间
光明稍纵即逝

仿佛我们一直在往地下走
仿佛黑暗才是永恒

叶如钢

紫色的云 发表于 2016-6-3 14:08
啊，我刚才发现我看错了一个词，晕

把白看成了黑

现在改得挺好。

叶如钢

紫色的云 发表于 2016-6-3 14:13
哈哈，一直沉浸在隧道的黑里，居然把光也当成了黑，见笑见笑

嗯。 没事。

叶如钢

紫色的云 发表于 2016-6-3 14:39
This is my first time here, " Poem translation" which belong to Liupai.
In fact,also the first  ...

You are most welcome.  It's nice meeting you as well.   I'm sure you'll continue to enjoy translating poetry.

紫色的云

叶如钢 发表于 2016-6-3 13:58
和原句意思不同。

This is my first time here, " Poem translation" which belong to Liupai.
In fact,also the first time translating poems to English，so I really appreciate your encouragement and any advice...And looking forward to more recommendations here in future.


Nice meeting you here,and many thanks!~

紫色的云

叶如钢 发表于 2016-6-3 13:58
和原句意思不同。

哈哈，一直沉浸在隧道的黑里，居然把光也当成了黑，见笑见笑

紫色的云

叶如钢 发表于 2016-6-3 13:58
和原句意思不同。

啊，我刚才发现我看错了一个词，晕

把白看成了黑

叶如钢

紫色的云 发表于 2016-6-3 13:56
嗯，好的。第二句您看我改后如何？

和原句意思不同。

紫色的云

叶如钢 发表于 2016-6-3 13:50
walking down underground

嗯，好的。第二句您看我改后如何？

叶如钢

紫色的云 发表于 2016-6-3 13:47
◎By CRH from YiChang East to Enshi

        By: Qingcheng Han

walking down underground