请懂英文的朋友帮忙检查 网友为我翻译的诗歌 我学习不用功,书到用时方狠少啊,为了中国云诗歌走向世界,特意请网友“天上的云”帮忙翻译了一首诗歌,请懂英文的朋友批评指点,不胜感谢。 翻译作者:天上的云 母亲啊 请闭上您的眼睛 $ G" K/ f( }% _/ P
(Mom, please close your eyes)
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我在白云村日夜忙碌母亲瘫痪后的事/ C) u; Z7 `# T% i8 u
I am busying in looking after my paralyzed mother day and night in BaiYun Village4 J, K8 z: K. B& k
看每日农经 种植尽可能致富的植物
$ w2 G6 S) d% y( d% t. XStudy agronomy daily and planting economic plants as much as possible to get -rich-quick/ S2 m3 Z, F% S# m
村庄容得下我奔小康的梦想吗
+ x! S! [1 w' O$ V! PWould the village accommodate my fairly well-off dream?
5 a& y* c4 t A我跟石头一样咬紧贫穷的牙关
4 D4 s1 a" Z0 J3 h6 MI set my impoverished teeth as stone2 M1 |# A) a+ C2 s# D* S. p3 c. |
和妻子在石头间挖掘美好幸福的阳光
% M4 M9 ^5 X; Q4 k1 \' |Mining the beautiful sunshine with my wife amongst the stones* c8 u- V9 F7 F$ V' M
我们把未来的小楼房都设计好了
4 a' D: O) _9 b. K" y/ e( _5 [Our small building for the future is well designed6 ^/ Y! ?7 ?! b% f2 V* C8 M. \1 V! h
需要有明亮的窗户来盛装东方斜射的光明
% d3 J5 I9 u7 P* Q0 r. m! p7 gHaving bright windows to contain eastern oblique light+ [! b& Z, U- \ D. m; [5 Y# i
这样母亲就能感受到春天的温暖
4 x8 t+ x; b8 c$ E8 I, W/ V4 tSo that my mom can feel the warmth of spring 僵硬的母亲像一只蜷缩的茧
]# I$ I w0 eMom lying like a curled up cocoon
z" u) Q+ k: e5 u她病床对面空着父亲躺过的床& c! U, c# {# I8 r6 G" S$ m8 j) i
Opposite to an empty bed of my father ever1 x( j+ G" z/ O7 Q2 c" N5 [
母亲像被烧过的锡纸眼角挂着凝重的眼霜
; }( a* c9 K5 ?2 ^: {7 YLike a burnt tinfoil hung with solemn eye-cream in her canthus. u4 q2 t0 f) N! |9 ?" g1 t
我知道您病得不轻啊谁又能拯救呢2 K" O+ p" M, |8 d
I know you are very ill, while who can save you?
+ ~. F+ {/ ^+ l* J6 H# q" j呵我亲爱的母亲您迷离的目光有如刀枪
2 w; |/ W5 g7 p8 D2 W- M" BOh, my dear Mom, your blurred eyes like a sword
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* n. ]- E$ o% j" w7 j) O% u几年过去了 我一直没有修好我们的房子
2 f* T) p% L# e4 U4 x ]Over the years I cannot build up our house
: r% g0 `, T7 a6 O( E; T我们夫妻俩多少回蒙头流泪
9 C$ P- K+ P! F o1 x& _) YHow many tears we wept hooded in bed ; Z( {1 |" ?( Z
在您隔壁的子夜里我们听到了您的哭泣
0 ]# t+ i8 m& O$ x+ m9 X; BWe heard you cry in the midnight on your next door) O8 Y' @: ?$ u2 u+ m0 o( A9 N/ B: l
我们不敢注视您的眼睛啊4 s# Q% z. H9 w I
We dare not look into your eyes
; G; _9 S3 |2 K }% L因您的病不可救药 神明也束手无策: u1 v4 j2 V# b- Z+ P
Because of your illness is far beyond remedy,
2 v/ m1 L1 A& {( Ieven god can do nothing 来看望您的人都用善意的谎言祝福您早日康复
, I3 |0 N% t* YPeople come to see you with well-meaning crammer wishing you a speedy recovery
& }9 a" h( Y' c1 `我却希望您早一天把眼睛闭上
R3 j3 G. X+ JI hope you close your eyes even one day earlier) E) c3 z5 H& w6 I2 @4 U0 ^3 H' k" j" t. N( A
闭上您的眼睛就等于打开了无垠的蓝天7 Y* Z+ m: i% {
Close your eyes is equal to open the boundless blue sky
% S( d# i' @. C4 w+ a, V+ G闭上您的眼睛吧 母亲4 J6 h; E! q! T: T8 n
Please close your eyes, Mom
5 b. y' d! D4 @' J' @# }闭上您的眼睛我和妻子就可以用奶嘴哺育您的来生) ~5 R+ B3 Y1 W2 f5 ` i- |
Close your eyes so my wife and I can use the nipple feeding your eternity |