请懂英文的朋友帮忙检查 网友为我翻译的诗歌 我学习不用功,书到用时方狠少啊,为了中国云诗歌走向世界,特意请网友“天上的云”帮忙翻译了一首诗歌,请懂英文的朋友批评指点,不胜感谢。 翻译作者:天上的云 母亲啊 请闭上您的眼睛 ! x0 K. [/ m& H- |
(Mom, please close your eyes)
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- W* S7 Q0 }, P" p7 I8 G$ ^, | c我在白云村日夜忙碌母亲瘫痪后的事
( { f# j( r- `& @' p% z) yI am busying in looking after my paralyzed mother day and night in BaiYun Village2 s! N2 a2 L* {$ t4 D
看每日农经 种植尽可能致富的植物( b6 ?0 ^1 C* L
Study agronomy daily and planting economic plants as much as possible to get -rich-quick
3 |4 C" L+ Y% C+ Y; C) Z1 E2 v村庄容得下我奔小康的梦想吗: _) W/ o; |" ^
Would the village accommodate my fairly well-off dream?
0 k1 A" C( @, C5 t, V我跟石头一样咬紧贫穷的牙关
/ m0 |! h5 ], C; j8 qI set my impoverished teeth as stone
0 a* {# d+ K; x7 i+ O和妻子在石头间挖掘美好幸福的阳光
& ?) _" e1 J. q2 A% AMining the beautiful sunshine with my wife amongst the stones
( Q& T6 h) U) k/ r! T4 O1 `! B我们把未来的小楼房都设计好了- R8 {7 N- R$ n; N5 j
Our small building for the future is well designed
0 ~) {8 |- H4 o$ Y需要有明亮的窗户来盛装东方斜射的光明
$ \4 a6 I9 k# GHaving bright windows to contain eastern oblique light
( B- _* f. a/ r, O/ m这样母亲就能感受到春天的温暖
- P. g; R3 e m) L3 ySo that my mom can feel the warmth of spring 僵硬的母亲像一只蜷缩的茧2 u ]6 [6 Z9 k4 |; T/ a
Mom lying like a curled up cocoon) ?' m/ A1 V% H( l
她病床对面空着父亲躺过的床
6 Q- z1 }+ M! n8 [6 `$ P, bOpposite to an empty bed of my father ever
S9 I% X8 I m: K$ }母亲像被烧过的锡纸眼角挂着凝重的眼霜- a7 F$ u/ ^7 @7 e9 t# o; l
Like a burnt tinfoil hung with solemn eye-cream in her canthus
0 u V3 v- b* A, e9 C我知道您病得不轻啊谁又能拯救呢7 w; K! F: u) D1 v, D, ?
I know you are very ill, while who can save you?
, V6 e6 `) k2 \- ?* _4 {呵我亲爱的母亲您迷离的目光有如刀枪
4 n# F. [! i- n+ F+ ]1 J9 h7 q$ iOh, my dear Mom, your blurred eyes like a sword4 h2 y u+ b/ ~6 d G4 X
9 o4 T( @0 \4 f: r X% n+ W几年过去了 我一直没有修好我们的房子
0 c0 r& ~& D+ AOver the years I cannot build up our house# c/ Q- Z) o/ q) F7 S1 M, L& S
我们夫妻俩多少回蒙头流泪4 | v0 W6 |4 j
How many tears we wept hooded in bed / L7 v- W1 m9 Y g3 f, X1 i( K+ V
在您隔壁的子夜里我们听到了您的哭泣% n# z# b% G. f
We heard you cry in the midnight on your next door; K) V/ P# g" b4 _/ t' U
我们不敢注视您的眼睛啊+ O% \- l, D1 d9 ^, T- n9 ?, `
We dare not look into your eyes9 I& X4 P6 H% W) R( q4 N
因您的病不可救药 神明也束手无策
9 r2 ^1 L: ?/ b. U: ]Because of your illness is far beyond remedy, 1 i1 O$ x+ H7 h( v
even god can do nothing 来看望您的人都用善意的谎言祝福您早日康复1 d9 A& ~0 P# z5 M9 n1 e
People come to see you with well-meaning crammer wishing you a speedy recovery, i L5 w& ?7 ?! m4 C/ B% e
我却希望您早一天把眼睛闭上4 ]: ?+ a4 D4 t- r; p5 f7 B
I hope you close your eyes even one day earlier
) X% I5 ~& Y( m9 z1 b4 j1 D) M闭上您的眼睛就等于打开了无垠的蓝天
3 E9 @& X/ o3 }, z" t% M ?Close your eyes is equal to open the boundless blue sky
4 [7 E4 v; w# N0 q4 |- r3 Y闭上您的眼睛吧 母亲
- V2 D) ^& F, D* APlease close your eyes, Mom
9 P0 o5 t3 }, k! e闭上您的眼睛我和妻子就可以用奶嘴哺育您的来生
! }1 W& ^7 y" X7 F* U5 RClose your eyes so my wife and I can use the nipple feeding your eternity |