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发表于 2018-9-7 19:12 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式

我看屈原越来越像父亲

作者:王爱民

今年端午节与父亲节,只隔了一天
我看屈原,越来越像父亲

一个昂首问天,一个埋头大地
一个给了我灵魂,一个给了我身体


The More I Look at Qu Yuan The More I See My Father

by Wang Aimin

The Dragon Boat Festival and Father's day are very close this year
The more I look at Qu Yuan, the more I see my father

One raised up and put heavenly questions, another bows down to the earth
One gave me my soul in spirit, another gave me my body in flesh


南京

作者:孤山云

一座城市会有多重,没有一个人测量过
一堵墙呢?
一个名字呢?
一个又一个名字躺在一起,不说话
不说话有多重?


Nanjing City

by Gu Yunshan

What is the weight of a city, no one ever weighed
What about a wall?
What about a name?
One name lies amongst other names, silently
What is the weight of silence then?


人与家国

作者:杨非木

所谓GDP,只是一个人的脂肪
再就是肌肉,或者皮肤

这一身好皮肤,脂肪与肌肉
能走多久
取决于人们看不见的骨头


People and Their Nation

by Yang Feimu

The so-called GDP, is like fats of a human body
and its muscles, or skins

How long could these fine skins, fats and muscles
carry the body depends on
the bones that human eyes cannot see through


典型

作者:孙国福

现在只有他
那个曾经偷偷往女生文具盒里放毛毛虫
曾因骂人、打架、早恋,无所不干
而被挂着大牌子游班示众的“坏分子”典型
经常去看望,瘫痪在床的班主任


A Typical Kind

by Sun Guofu

Now only him
the one who secretly put caterpillars into girls' pencil boxes
the puppy lover often cursed, fought, and did all bad things
a typical kind of "bad boy" being shamed openly among classes
the one who often visits our head teacher who is lying in hospital bed for ages


北漂诗人

作者:小人鱼在天堂

诗人方勇刚喝醉了,呕吐过之后望着天空
月色凄美。良久,他痴痴地说
只有月亮上
才不要暂住证和身份证


North-Drifting Poet

by Xiaoyuren Zaitiantang

Fang Yong the poet got drunk, looking up to the sky after vomited
the moonlight was cold but beautiful. After quiet a while he murmured 
Only there on the moon
no need to have a temporary residence or ID card


从故乡开出的火车

作者:雪小雨

越跑越快
留下长长的、弯弯绕绕的距离
像一根,从故乡身体里抽出的肠子
把乡愁的肚皮,越拽越空


The Train Departing My Hometown

by Xue Xiaoyu

It is running faster and faster
leaving a long long, winding distance
like pulling an intenstine out of the body of my hometown
streching the belly of homesickness, as hollow as it moves on


江山

作者:玄荒

六月的第一日。山坡上

银发夫妇,躬着身,一个前面拉,一个后面推
由下往上推着婴儿车

桔色的晨曦中,群山正推着朝阳,缓缓升起


River and Mountain

by Xuan Huang

First day of June. Up on the hill

a couple in grey hair, bending down, one pulling, another pushing
they are trying to move a baby pram upward

The day dawns in orange beams of light, being pushed up by mountains slowly


影子

作者:余翔蓝天

没有光
你什么都不是

有了光
你才发现
原来你是如此之黑


Shadow

by Yuxiang Lantian

Without light
You were nothing

With light
you then realised 
yourself had been on the dark side


割草机


作者:李向钊

它长着一副钢铁的牙齿
却不具备能消化一棵草的胃


Lawn Mower

by Li Xiangzhao

strong iron-steel teeth it has
yet no stomach to digest one tiny grass


县衙

作者:四面来峰

隔三岔五
有人在阶梯前
下跪,磕头,流泪

我该死,好几回
把这里误以为是公墓


County Government House 

by Simian Laifeng

Ocassionally 
People come to the front of the ladders
Standing on their knees, bowing their heads and shedding teas

Damn it, several times
I mistook this place as public cemeteries


干净

作者:王登学

在外打工多年的外甥突然领了女朋友回来
姐姐的穿着比以前干净了许多
院落房间也比以前干净了许多
天空也格外干净。还有
一家人的表情、说话的声音、骂鸡骂狗的声音也干净了许多


Clean and Clear

by Wang Dengxue

My nephew suddenly came back with his girlfriend after years working away
My sister wears cleaner clothes than ever
Their rooms, front and back yards are much cleaner 
The sky is notably clearer, and the whole family
their appearances, tones, and even their cursing voices are cleaner and clearer 




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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2018-9-8 09:36 | 只看该作者
南京

作者:孤山云

一座城市会有多重,没有一个人测量过
一堵墙呢?
一个名字呢?
一个又一个名字躺在一起,不说话
不说话有多重?


Nanjing City

by Gu Yunshan

What is the weight of a city, no one ever weighed
What about a wall?
What about a name?
More and more names lie down together, silently
What is the weight of silence then?

典型

作者:孙国福

现在只有他
那个曾经偷偷往女生文具盒里放毛毛虫
曾因骂人、打架、早恋,无所不干
而被挂着大牌子游班示众的“坏分子”典型
经常去看望,瘫痪在床的班主任


A Typical Kind

by Sun Guofu

Now only him
the one who secretly put caterpillars into girls' pencil boxes
the puppy lover who cursed, fought, and did all bad things
a typical kind of "bad boy" being shamed openly among classes
often visits our head teacher who has been lying in hospital bed for ages


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 楼主| 发表于 2018-9-8 17:35 | 只看该作者
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我看屈原越来越像父亲

作者:王爱民

今年端午节与父亲节,只隔了一天
我看屈原,越来越像父亲

一个昂首问天,一个埋头大地
一个给了我灵魂,一个给了我身体


The More I Look at Qu Yuan The More I See My Father

by Wang Aimin

The Dragon Boat Festival and Father's day are very close this year
The more I look at Qu Yuan, the more I see my father

One raised up and put heavenly questions, another bowed down to the earth
One gave me my soul in spirit, another gave me my body in flesh



南京

作者:孤山云

一座城市会有多重,没有一个人测量过
一堵墙呢?
一个名字呢?
一个又一个名字躺在一起,不说话
不说话有多重?


Nanjing City

by Gu Yunshan

What is the weight of a city, no one ever weighed
What about a wall?
What about a name?
More and more names lie down together, silently
What is the weight of silence then?



人与家国

作者:杨非木

所谓GDP,只是一个人的脂肪
再就是肌肉,或者皮肤

这一身好皮肤,脂肪与肌肉
能走多久
取决于人们看不见的骨头


People and Their Nation

by Yang Feimu

The so-called GDP, is like fats of a human body
and its muscles, or skins

How long could these fine skins, fats and muscles
carry the body depends on
the bones that human eyes cannot see through



典型

作者:孙国福

现在只有他
那个曾经偷偷往女生文具盒里放毛毛虫
曾因骂人、打架、早恋,无所不干
而被挂着大牌子游班示众的“坏分子”典型
经常去看望,瘫痪在床的班主任


A Typical Kind

by Sun Guofu

Now only him
the one who secretly put caterpillars into girls' pencil boxes
the puppy lover who cursed, fought, and did all bad things
a typical kind of "bad boy" being shamed openly among classes
often visits our head teacher who has been lying in hospital bed for ages



北漂诗人

作者:小人鱼在天堂

诗人方勇刚喝醉了,呕吐过之后望着天空
月色凄美。良久,他痴痴地说
只有月亮上
才不要暂住证和身份证


North-Drifting Poet

by Xiaoyuren Zaitiantang

Fang Yong the poet got drunk, looked up to the sky after vomited
the moonlight was cold but beautiful. After quite a while he murmured
Only there on the moon
no need to have a temporary residence or ID card



从故乡开出的火车

作者:雪小雨

越跑越快
留下长长的、弯弯绕绕的距离
像一根,从故乡身体里抽出的肠子
把乡愁的肚皮,越拽越空


The Train Departing My Hometown

by Xue Xiaoyu

It is running faster and faster
leaving a long long, winding distance
like pulling an intestine out of the body of my hometown
stretching the belly of homesickness, as hollow as it moves on



江山

作者:玄荒

六月的第一日。山坡上

银发夫妇,躬着身,一个前面拉,一个后面推
由下往上推着婴儿车

桔色的晨曦中,群山正推着朝阳,缓缓升起


River and Mountain

by Xuan Huang

First day of June. On the hill

a couple in grey hair, bending down, one is pulling, another pushing
they are trying to move a baby pram upward

The orange beams of dawn light, being pushed by mountains, slowly rising up



影子

作者:余翔蓝天

没有光
你什么都不是

有了光
你才发现
原来你是如此之黑


Shadow

by Yuxiang Lantian

Without light
You were nothing

With light
you then realised
yourself had been on the dark side



割草机

作者:李向钊

它长着一副钢铁的牙齿
却不具备能消化一棵草的胃


Lawn Mower

by Li Xiangzhao

strong iron-steel teeth it has
yet no stomach to digest one tiny grass



县衙

作者:四面来峰

隔三岔五
有人在阶梯前
下跪,磕头,流泪

我该死,好几回
把这里误以为是公墓


County Government House

by Simian Laifeng

Occasionally
People come to the front of the ladders
Standing on their knees, bowing their heads and shedding tears

Damn it, for several times
I mistook this place as public cemeteries



干净

作者:王登学

在外打工多年的外甥突然领了女朋友回来
姐姐的穿着比以前干净了许多
院落房间也比以前干净了许多
天空也格外干净。还有
一家人的表情、说话的声音、骂鸡骂狗的声音也干净了许多


Clean and Clear

by Wang Dengxue

My nephew suddenly came back with his girlfriend after years working away
My sister wears cleaner clothes than ever
Their rooms, front and back yards are also much cleaner
The sky is notably clearer, and the whole family
their appearances, tones, and even their cursing voices are cleaner and clearer
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发表于 2018-9-8 20:02 | 只看该作者
朱峰 发表于 2018-9-8 17:35
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(又检查了一遍,稍加修改)                                          我们恐怕还得修改


我看屈原越来越像父亲

作者:王爱民

今年端午节与父亲节,只隔了一天
我看屈原,越来越像父亲

一个昂首问天,一个埋头大地
一个给了我灵魂,一个给了我身体


The More I Look at Qu Yuan The More I See My Father

by Wang Aimin

The Dragon Boat Festival and Father's day are very close this year
The more I look at Qu Yuan, the more I see my father

One raised up and put heavenly questions, another bowed down to the earth
One gave me my soul in spirit, another gave me my body in flesh



南京

作者:孤山云

一座城市会有多重,没有一个人测量过
一堵墙呢?
一个名字呢?
一个又一个名字躺在一起,不说话
不说话有多重?


Nanjing City

by Gu Yunshan

What is the weight of a city, no one ever weighed
What about a wall?
What about a name?
More and more names lie down together, silently
What is the weight of silence then?



人与家国

作者:杨非木

所谓GDP,只是一个人的脂肪
再就是肌肉,或者皮肤

这一身好皮肤,脂肪与肌肉
能走多久
取决于人们看不见的骨头


People and Their Nation

by Yang Feimu

The so-called GDP, is like fats of a human body
and its muscles, or skins

How long could these fine skins, fats and muscles
carry the body depends on
the bones that human eyes cannot see through



典型

作者:孙国福

现在只有他
那个曾经偷偷往女生文具盒里放毛毛虫
曾因骂人、打架、早恋,无所不干
而被挂着大牌子游班示众的“坏分子”典型
经常去看望,瘫痪在床的班主任


A Typical Kind

by Sun Guofu

Now only him                                                         (此处 him 不可做主语)
the one who secretly put caterpillars into girls' pencil boxes
the puppy lover who cursed, fought, and did all bad things
a typical kind of "bad boy" being shamed openly among classes
often visits our head teacher who has been lying in hospital bed for ages



北漂诗人

作者:小人鱼在天堂

诗人方勇刚喝醉了,呕吐过之后望着天空
月色凄美。良久,他痴痴地说
只有月亮上
才不要暂住证和身份证


North-Drifting Poet

by Xiaoyuren Zaitiantang

Fang Yong the poet got drunk, looked up to the sky after vomited
the moonlight was cold but beautiful. After quite a while he murmured
Only there on the moon
no need to have a temporary residence or ID card



从故乡开出的火车

作者:雪小雨

越跑越快
留下长长的、弯弯绕绕的距离
像一根,从故乡身体里抽出的肠子
把乡愁的肚皮,越拽越空


The Train Departing My Hometown

by Xue Xiaoyu

It is running faster and faster
leaving a long long, winding distance
like pulling an intestine out of the body of my hometown
stretching the belly of homesickness, as hollow as it moves on



江山

作者:玄荒

六月的第一日。山坡上

银发夫妇,躬着身,一个前面拉,一个后面推
由下往上推着婴儿车

桔色的晨曦中,群山正推着朝阳,缓缓升起


River and Mountain

by Xuan Huang

First day of June. On the hill

a couple in grey hair, bending down, one is pulling, another pushing
they are trying to move a baby pram upward

The orange beams of dawn light, being pushed by mountains, slowly rising up



影子

作者:余翔蓝天

没有光
你什么都不是

有了光
你才发现
原来你是如此之黑


Shadow

by Yuxiang Lantian

Without light
You were nothing

With light
you then realised
yourself had been on the dark side  (= 你曾在黑暗那一面你原来如此之黑 “ 外界环境黑,非该人物黑 ”;2. yourself 不可做主语)



割草机

作者:李向钊

它长着一副钢铁的牙齿
却不具备能消化一棵草的胃


Lawn Mower

by Li Xiangzhao

strong iron-steel teeth it has
yet no stomach to digest one tiny grass



县衙

作者:四面来峰

隔三岔五
有人在阶梯前
下跪,磕头,流泪

我该死,好几回
把这里误以为是公墓


County Government House

by Simian Laifeng

Occasionally
People come to the front of the ladders
Standing on their knees, bowing their heads and shedding tears

Damn it, for several times
I mistook this place as public cemeteries



干净

作者:王登学

在外打工多年的外甥突然领了女朋友回来
姐姐的穿着比以前干净了许多
院落房间也比以前干净了许多
天空也格外干净。还有
一家人的表情、说话的声音、骂鸡骂狗的声音也干净了许多


Clean and Clear

by Wang Dengxue

My nephew suddenly came back with his girlfriend after years working away
My sister wears cleaner clothes than ever
Their rooms, front and back yards are also much cleaner
The sky is notably clearer, and the whole family
their appearances, tones, and even their cursing voices are cleaner and clearer
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-9-9 16:34 | 只看该作者
李世纯 发表于 2018-9-8 22:02
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谢谢你的意见!
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李世纯 发表于 2018-9-8 20:02
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我看屈原越来越像父亲

作者:王爱民

今年端午节与父亲节,只隔了一天
我看屈原,越来越像父亲

一个昂首问天,一个埋头大地
一个给了我灵魂,一个给了我身体


The More I Look at Qu Yuan The More I See My Father

by Wang Aimin

The Dragon Boat Festival and Father's day are very close this year   (接近=只隔了一天?)
The more I look at Qu Yuan, the more I see my father    (look at 看,see 看见,两个均属瞬间动词,不可表示持续动作,不可与:越 ... ...越 ... ...联用)
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提读,欣赏!问候诗友!遥祝安康!
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