Why should the world be over-wise,
为什么，我们要聪颖卓越，要智慧超然，
In counting all our tears and sighs?
要心中有数，所有泪水和伤感？
Nay, let them only see us, while
而且，而且，还要，还要啊，面具，
We wear the mask.
戴着面具，彼此看清，让那所有，一目了然。 （不但要1. ... ... 而且 “ 在1.前提下/基础上 ” 更要/还要 ... ...）
李世纯 发表于 2018-11-14 11:05
7. NEVER seek to tell thy love
Love that never told can be; （叠加前置词；着重倒装）
8. Murmur, a little sadly, how Love fled （一主双谓：a多么b ... ...，而又多么c ... ...！）
And paced upon the mountains overhead
And hid his face amid a crowd of stars.
李世纯 发表于 2018-11-14 10:39
5. And a small cabin build there, of clay and wattles made: （限定语后置；分词滞后短语）
在 ...
6. His place, as he sat and as he thought, was not （程度倒置，状语割裂，一谓双主）
In anything that he constructed, so frail,
So barely lit, so shadowed over and naught,
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