汉诗英译： 在K343火车上 原创： 废墟，繁花似锦 翻译： 郁序新

郁序新

On K343 train
By Ruins, Rich flowers
Translated by Tulip


The long curved gourd-line arduously crawls through compartments
As if it wanted to press down the great noise here
Local accents are always with you on the way
Interwoven, overlapping, crowded
And stuff in the pockets of the shabby iron cattle

It’s only her that keeps quite without any words
The girl, in her eyes tears rinsing the past
Looks dull, gazing out through the window
The woods sound in the autumn certainly
Makes her shiver unconsciously

While for me, I am as silent as her
Absorbed in short lines of poems outside
Lying on the barren farmlands and crops
Silently I read their sigh
And read up-down -breath of the land


2012年3月8日
翻译：Tulip





在K343火车上
原创：废墟，繁花似锦


悠长的葫芦丝艰难地穿过车厢
想要熨平这里嘈杂的人声
他们总是带着方言上路
交织，重叠，拥挤
在火车破旧的口袋里


只有她，安静得不发一言
用泪水漂洗往事的姑娘
目光呆滞，她凝望窗外
秋天走过树林的声音一定
会让她不自主颤栗


而我，和她一样保持了缄默
埋首于窗外的一行行短诗
在贫瘠中隆起的菜畦和庄稼
默读它们的叹息
默读大地的起伏   

郑智得

拜读学习！感谢2位带来的巨大精彩！

招小波

赏读、学习！{:soso_e163:}

张智文

真快哦  {:soso_e160:}{:soso_e142:}

汤胜林

翻译家辛苦了！{:soso_e160:}

郭海明

谢谢翻译老师！感觉此时不好翻。。收藏啦~

荒原猛士

欣赏

绝不收兵

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未离子

太爽了。感觉翻译的感觉好爽，真羡慕。啊！

韩庆成

序新辛苦了，译得好，译文将加入到帖子中。{:soso_e181:}