Fall

潘学峰

Fall


By Xuefeng Pan

Many times have passed until I begin to appreciate your heart
Farewell, wordlessly between you and I, wouldn't go too far,
In a hidden place, I am sure, you will wait to see hopes start,
And longing for a fresh new world in the coming next year

Copyrights Reserved, posted in 2018


中文译文



秋

经历了多次我开始欣赏你的心              
你我无声的告别尚未远盾，              
在一个隐蔽的地方，我相信，
你会等着看到希望的开始，              
渴望明年诗歌全新的世界            


版权保留，张贴在2018

潘学峰

秋

经历了多次我开始欣赏你的心              
你我无声的告别尚未远盾，              
在一个隐蔽的地方，我相信，
你会等着看到希望的开始，              
渴望明年全新的世界悄悄来临         

潘学峰

Fall
By Xuefeng Pan

Many times have passed until I begin to appreciate your heart
Farewell, wordlessly between you and I, wouldn't go too far,
In a hidden place, I am sure, you will wait to see hopes start,
And longing for a fresh new world in the coming next year

Copyrights Reserved, posted in 2018

秋

经历了多次我开始欣赏你的心              
你我无声的告别尚未远盾，              
在一个隐蔽的地方，我相信，
你会等着看到希望的开始，              
渴望明年全新的世界悄悄来临

Copyrights Reserved, posted in 2018      

李世纯

潘学峰 发表于 2018-10-4 22:08
Fall
By Xuefeng Pan

Fall
By Xuefeng Pan

Many times have passed until I begin to appreciate your heart
Farewell, wordlessly between you and I, wouldn't go too far,
In a hidden place, I am sure, you will wait to see hopes start,
And longing for a fresh new world in the coming next year

Copyrights Reserved, posted in 2018

秋

经历了多次我开始欣赏你的心              
你我无声的告别尚未远盾，              
在一个隐蔽的地方，我相信，
你会等着看到希望的开始，              
渴望明年全新的世界悄悄来临

Copyrights Reserved, posted in 2018  


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a misuse of the word “  until  ” in your first line，i'm afraid

李世纯

潘学峰 发表于 2018-10-4 22:08
Fall
By Xuefeng Pan

Fall
By Xuefeng Pan

Many times have passed until I begin to appreciate your heart
Farewell, wordlessly between you and I, wouldn't go too far,
In a hidden place, I am sure, you will wait to see hopes start,
And longing for a fresh new world in the coming next year

Copyrights Reserved, posted in 2018

秋

经历了多次我开始欣赏你的心              
你我无声的告别尚未远盾，              
在一个隐蔽的地方，我相信，
你会等着看到希望的开始，              
渴望明年全新的世界悄悄来临

Copyrights Reserved, posted in 2018  


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a misuse of the word “  until  ” in your first line，i'

李世纯

李世纯 发表于 2018-10-5 11:15
Fall
By Xuefeng Pan

a misuse of the word “  until  ” in your first line，i'm afraid

潘学峰

Fall

Many times I've passed by before appreciating your heart
Farewell, wordlessly between you and I, wouldn't go too far,
In a hidden place, I am sure, you will wait to see hopes start,
And longing for a fresh new world in the coming next year
Copyright © Xuefeng Pan | Year Posted 2018
秋 （四行诗体）

潘学峰

李世纯 发表于 2018-10-5 13:16
a misuse of the word “  until  ” in your first line，i'm afraid

世纯兄，谢谢了，我确实误用，我修改下：

Fall

Many times I've passed by before appreciating your heart
Farewell, wordlessly between you and I, wouldn't go too far,
In a hidden place, I am sure, you will wait to see hopes start,
And longing for a fresh new world in the coming next year
Copyright © Xuefeng Pan | Year Posted 2018
秋 （四行诗体）

李世纯

潘学峰 发表于 2018-10-5 11:17
世纯兄，谢谢了，我确实误用，我修改下：

Fall

Fall

Many times I've passed by before appreciating your heart
Farewell, wordlessly between you and I, wouldn't go too far,
In a hidden place, I am sure, you will wait to see hopes start,
And longing for a fresh new world in the coming next year
Copyright © Xuefeng Pan | Year Posted 2018
秋 （四行诗体）


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No efforts in this expression （in red part）

李世纯

李世纯 发表于 2018-10-5 11:23
Fall

Many times I've passed by before appreciating your heart

No regret this expression intensity