《喊走》罗伯特.布莱

黍黎释

喊走

黍黎释译

寒风吹过玉米地，

成群的黑鸟飞过海洋。

我想离开这里，出去，

到屋外，只要有风的地方。


我靠着破屋棚的墙，我居住

的那儿没人能找到我。

我盯着屋外糖槭的叶子

在神秘的水中飘浮。


什么是我想要的？不是钱，

不是大桌子，不是十间的房子。

这才是我想做的：坐这儿，

啥也不干，被风喊走。


我想去一个新的地方，建个

一个门的小屋，坐门槛上。

二十年后，你将会看到我脸上的表情

和你在草丛中看到的一样。


The Call Away

by：Robert Bly

A cold wind flows over the cornfields，

Fleets of blackbirds ride that ocean.

I want to be out of here, go out,

Outdoors, anywhere in wind.


My back against a shed wall, I settle

Down where no one can find me.

I stare out at the box-elder leaves

Moving frond-like in that mysterious water.


What is it that I want? Not money,

Not a large desk, not a house with ten rooms.

This is what I want to do: to sit here,

To take no part, to be called away by wind.


I want to go the new way, build a shack

With one door, sit against the door frame.

After twenty years, you will see on my face

The same expression you see in the grass.

叶如钢

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“破屋棚”---原文似乎没有破的意思。

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