Solitary Australia

潘学峰

The land floating in the ocean far
far in the south was named Australia
Which is thought by its aboriginal people differently
As it can be seen by BC

It may refers either 'an old British Colony'
or a time 'Before Christian'
Either way of interpretations could cause no faint

Clearly, Guards of kangaroo are doing best jobs:
Every human asylum seeker has totally been  stopped

Then liberal members step forward to declare the scrolls
A final solution to the immigrants' deal is completely adopted
The land of Australia is fast moving to the south far,
far away from the hemisphere north

潘学峰

孤单的澳洲

海洋中漂浮的一块土地              
远远地在南方被称为澳大利亚。              
对此，原住民会有不同于              
BC所能看到的想法              

它可能指“一个古老的英国殖民地”
或者那时在基督徒面前              
任何一种解释都不会随意。              

显然，袋鼠守护者做了最好的工作：              
每一个寻求庇护的人都被完全阻止了。              

然后自由党成员挺身而出宣布卷轴：              
移民协议的最终解决方案完全被采纳。              

澳大利亚的土地正在迅速向南方移动，              
远离北半球

Solitary Australia

The land floating in the ocean far
far in the south was named Australia
Which is thought by its aboriginal people differently
As it can be seen by BC

It may refer to either 'an old British Colony'
or a time 'Before Christian'
Either way of interpretations could cause no faint

Clearly, Guards of kangaroo are doing best jobs:
Every human asylum seeker has totally been  stopped

Then liberal members step forward to declare the scrolls
A final solution to the immigrants' deal is completely adopted
The land of Australia is fast moving to the south far,
far away from the hemisphere north

朱峰

BC, Before Christ?

姚大鹏

提读，欣赏!问候诗友!遥祝安康!

潘学峰

这首诗歌试图劝讽澳大利亚自由党的移民政策，现在自由党已经重新评估了其移民政策，除悉尼和墨尔本之外不再刻意限制移民

李世纯

潘学峰 发表于 2018-8-28 07:29
孤单的澳洲

海洋中漂浮的一块土地              

小弟不耻上问：红色部分






孤单的澳洲

海洋中漂浮的一块土地              
远远地在南方被称为澳大利亚。              
对此，原住民会有不同于              
BC所能看到的想法              

它可能指“一个古老的英国殖民地”
或者那时在基督徒面前              
任何一种解释都不会随意。              

显然，袋鼠守护者做了最好的工作：              
每一个寻求庇护的人都被完全阻止了。              

然后自由党成员挺身而出宣布卷轴：              
移民协议的最终解决方案完全被采纳。              

澳大利亚的土地正在迅速向南方移动，   （属暗喻？）           
远离北半球

Solitary Australia

The land floating in the ocean far
far in the south was named Australia
Which is thought by its aboriginal people differently
As it can be seen by BC

It may refer to either 'an old British Colony'
or a time 'Before Christian'
Either way of interpretations could cause no faint

Clearly, Guards of kangaroo are doing best jobs:
Every human asylum seeker has totally been  stopped

Then liberal members step forward to declare the scrolls
A final solution to the immigrants' deal is completely adopted
The land of Australia is fast moving to the south [color=Red]far,
far away from the hemisphere north
对一个人的不公就是对所有人的威胁
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李世纯

潘学峰 发表于 2018-8-28 07:29
孤单的澳洲

海洋中漂浮的一块土地              

小弟不耻上问：红色部分






孤单的澳洲

海洋中漂浮的一块土地              
远远地在南方被称为澳大利亚。              
对此，原住民会有不同于              
BC所能看到的想法              

它可能指“一个古老的英国殖民地”
或者那时在基督徒面前              
任何一种解释都不会随意。              

显然，袋鼠守护者做了最好的工作：              
每一个寻求庇护的人都被完全阻止了。              

然后自由党成员挺身而出宣布卷轴：              
移民协议的最终解决方案完全被采纳。              

澳大利亚的土地正在迅速向南方移动，   （属暗喻？）           
远离北半球

Solitary Australia

The land floating in the ocean far
far in the south was named Australia
Which is thought by its aboriginal people differently
As it can be seen by BC

It may refer to either 'an old British Colony'
or a time 'Before Christian'
Either way of interpretations could cause no faint

Clearly, Guards of kangaroo are doing best jobs:
Every human asylum seeker has totally been  stopped

Then liberal members step forward to declare the scrolls
A final solution to the immigrants' deal is completely adopted
The land of Australia is fast moving to the south [color=Red]far,
far away from the hemisphere north
对一个人的不公就是对所有人的威胁
回复

李世纯

抱歉：无编辑权，临屏很不方便

应是：

小弟不耻上问：红色部分






孤单的澳洲

海洋中漂浮的一块土地              
远远地在南方被称为澳大利亚。              
对此，原住民会有不同于              
BC所能看到的想法              

它可能指“一个古老的英国殖民地”
或者那时在基督徒面前              
任何一种解释都不会随意。              

显然，袋鼠守护者做了最好的工作：              
每一个寻求庇护的人都被完全阻止了。              

然后自由党成员挺身而出宣布卷轴：              
移民协议的最终解决方案完全被采纳。              

澳大利亚的土地正在迅速向南方移动，   （属暗喻？）           
远离北半球

Solitary Australia

The land floating in the ocean far
far in the south was named Australia
Which is thought by its aboriginal people differently
As it can be seen by BC

It may refer to either 'an old British Colony'
or a time 'Before Christian'
Either way of interpretations could cause no faint

Clearly, Guards of kangaroo are doing best jobs:
Every human asylum seeker has totally been  stopped

Then liberal members step forward to declare the scrolls
A final solution to the immigrants' deal is completely adopted
The land of Australia is fast moving to the south far,
far away from the hemisphere north
对一个人的不公就是对所有人的威胁
回复

李世纯

潘学峰 发表于 2018-8-28 07:29
孤单的澳洲

海洋中漂浮的一块土地              

孤单的澳洲

海洋中漂浮的一块土地              
远远地在南方被称为澳大利亚。              
对此，原住民会有不同于              
BC所能看到的想法              

它可能指“一个古老的英国殖民地”
或者那时在基督徒面前              
任何一种解释都不会随意。              

显然，袋鼠守护者做了最好的工作：              
每一个寻求庇护的人都被完全阻止了。              

然后自由党成员挺身而出宣布卷轴：              
移民协议的最终解决方案完全被采纳。              

澳大利亚的土地正在迅速向南方移动，              
远离北半球

Solitary Australia

The land floating in the ocean far
far in the south was named Australia
Which is thought by its aboriginal people differently
As it can be seen by BC

It may refer to either 'an old British Colony'
or a time 'Before Christian'
Either way of interpretations could cause no faint

Clearly, Guards of kangaroo are doing best jobs:
Every human asylum seeker has totally been  stopped

Then liberal members step forward to declare the scrolls
A final solution to the immigrants' deal is completely adopted
The land of Australia is fast moving to the south far,
far away from the hemisphere north
对一个人的不公就是对所有人的威胁



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红色部分是否有更为合适的中文词语？

潘学峰

李世纯 发表于 2018-10-5 20:50
孤单的澳洲

海洋中漂浮的一块土地              

这不影响整首诗歌的理解，原住民又称土著，我觉得土著略逊尊敬