So We’ll Go No More a-Roving

龙小月

So, we'll go no more a-roving

     So late into the night,

Though the heart be still as loving,

     And the moon be still as bright.



For the sword outwears its sheath,

     And the soul wears out the breast,

And the heart must pause to breathe,

     And love itself have rest.



Though the night was made for loving,

      And the day returns too soon,

Yet we'll go no more a roving

By the light of the moon.

那么，我们不要再流浪了
  夜已经如此深了
虽然心儿仍然眷恋着
  月儿仍旧明亮

看那能把剑鞘磨损的利剑
  胸口为满腔热血所累
心儿也得停下呼吸
  再爱也得喘口气

虽然黑夜是为了考验爱
  白天很快就要回来
但我们还是不要再流浪了
  在这如诉的月光下

朱峰

适当考虑一下韵脚可能会更好。

龙小月

朱峰 发表于 2018-8-30 18:05
适当考虑一下韵脚可能会更好。

嗯，对，尽力在押，但押不到

潘学峰

算了！我们将不必再徘徊
So We'll Go No More a Roving
By Lord Byron (George Gordon)
翻译：潘学峰

算了！我们将不必如此徘徊
更不必等到夜深人静的时候
尽管内心依然恋恋不舍
而月色也依然是那样皎洁
因为剑鞘被剑刃磨损
而灵魂也洞穿了心胸
心脏跳动的难以呼吸
爱情也该到了休息的时侯！
即使夜色专门为爱情而设
而白昼也来的太快
我们将不必在月色中徘徊

So, we'll go no more a roving           
  So late into the night,                     
Though the heart be still as loving,   
  And the moon be still as bright.      
For the sword outwears its sheath,   
  And the soul wears out the breast,  
And the heart must pause to breathe,
  And love itself have rest.                    
Though the night was made for loving,
  And the day returns too soon,              
Yet we'll go no more a roving                  
By the light of the moon.   

姚大鹏

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