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北冰洋赛季优胜作品英译(二)

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发表于 2018-12-8 18:48 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式

寻找

作者:明柍

我从呼吸中寻找
从散落的拼图里
从遗失的迷宫里

即使我提着灯穿过呵
也无法辨析一粒尘埃


Searching 

by Ming Ying

I am searching in the midst of my breaths
amongst the jigsaw puzzle pieces 
inside the long-forgotten maze

Oh, even I am passing by with a lantern in my hand
I still would not see one dust particle clearly 



鱼说

作者:黄锡锋

我想说出一条河流的清澈
谁知,一张口全是一个个泡泡


Fish Said


by Huang Xifeng

I wanted to express the cleanliness of a river
but who knows why, only bubbles coming out of my mouth



包青天

作者:蓝天一嘘          

脸越黑,额头的月亮就越明
可那个天依然被青包着

一群群冤魂,从这个山头跪到那个山头
跪出一片苍翠,层峦叠嶂,呼为江山


Justice Bao

by Lantian Yixu

The darker the face looks, the brighter the moon on his forehead
but the sky is still covered by the bluish

groups of innocent ghosts, walking on their knees crossing hilltops
waking up green fields and winding mountains, called territory



黑板

作者:刘小文

写一遍是白
擦一遍是黑

许多事  越擦越黑
最后,只剩下一块板
与一地的灰


Blackboard

by Liu Xiaowen

white when being written
black when being wiped off

lots of things, getting worse when trying to cover up
until at last, left barely a board
and ashes on the ground



草民是这样的

作者:故乡香

冲锋在前、撤退在后、上去跟鬼子拚刺刀拚命、没怕过

支援国家、自觉勒紧裤腰带、跟饿鬼过招三年
没怨过

被城管、计生办、拆迁办、信访办追得磕头求饶
硬是没伸出半个小指头


The Grassroots Are Like This

by Guxiang Xiang

fought at forefront but withdrew at last, also attended bayonet fight, never feared

supporting the country, tightened belt to fight hunger for three years
never complained

however begging on their knees when persecuted by government offices
namingly Urban Admin, Population Control, House Demolishing, Letters and Visits 
never pointed even a half-extended pinky finger


历史

作者:记住忘记

被虎狼赶逐的羊
跑成一杆猎枪


History

by Jizhu Wangji

Those Sheep, running after them are tigers and wolves
shaping up the form of a hunting rifle



选择

作者:方世开

走什么路至关重要啊
因为选择错误,中游的黄河
连累它的上游,也被叫成黄河


Choice

by Fang Shikai

Vital which road to take
Due to wrong choice, midstream of The Yellow River
implicated its upstream, also called The Yellow River


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沙发
发表于 2018-12-9 19:20 | 只看该作者
寻找

作者:明柍

我从呼吸中寻找
从散落的拼图里
从遗失的迷宫里

即使我提着灯穿过呵
也无法辨析一粒尘埃


Searching

by Ming Ying

I am searching in the midst of my breaths
amongst the jigsaw puzzle pieces
inside the long-forgotten maze

Oh, even I am passing by with a lantern in my hand
I still would not see one dust particle clearly



鱼说

作者:黄锡锋

我想说出一条河流的清澈
谁知,一张口全是一个个泡泡


Fish Said

by Huang Xifeng

I wanted to express the cleanliness of a river
but who knows why, only bubbles coming out of my mouth



包青天

作者:蓝天一嘘         

脸越黑,额头的月亮就越明
可那个天依然被青包着

一群群冤魂,从这个山头跪到那个山头
跪出一片苍翠,层峦叠嶂,呼为江山


Justice Bao

by Lantian Yixu

The darker the face looks, the brighter the moon on his forehead
but the sky is still covered by the bluish

groups of innocent ghosts, walking on their knees crossing hilltops
waking up green fields and winding mountains, called territory



黑板

作者:刘小文

写一遍是白
擦一遍是黑

许多事  越擦越黑
最后,只剩下一块板
与一地的灰


Blackboard

by Liu Xiaowen

white when being written
black when being wiped off

lots of things, getting worse when trying to cover up
until at last, left barely a board
and ashes on the ground     
        (母语英美者理解:当你尝试隐瞒/掩盖许多事情时,往往要在最后,只剩下一地的灰,与一块板
时,这些事情才会逐渐变好/向好/利好/止损)



草民是这样的

作者:故乡香

冲锋在前、撤退在后、上去跟鬼子拚刺刀拚命、没怕过

支援国家、自觉勒紧裤腰带、跟饿鬼过招三年
没怨过

被城管、计生办、拆迁办、信访办追得磕头求饶
硬是没伸出半个小指头


The Grassroots Are Like This

by Guxiang Xiang

fought at forefront but withdrew at last, also attended bayonet fight, never feared

supporting the country, tightened belt to fight hunger for three years
never complained

however begging on their knees when persecuted by government offices
namingly Urban Admin, Population Control, House Demolishing, Letters and Visits
never pointed even a half-extended pinky finger


历史

作者:记住忘记

被虎狼赶逐的羊
跑成一杆猎枪


History

by Jizhu Wangji

Those Sheep, running after them are tigers and wolves
shaping up the form of a hunting rifle



选择

作者:方世开

走什么路至关重要啊
因为选择错误,中游的黄河
连累它的上游,也被叫成黄河


Choice

by Fang Shikai

Vital which road to take
Due to wrong choice, midstream of The Yellow River
implicated its upstream, also called The Yellow River
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板凳
发表于 2018-12-9 19:41 | 只看该作者

寻找

作者:明柍

我从呼吸中寻找
从散落的拼图里
从遗失的迷宫里

即使我提着灯穿过呵
也无法辨析一粒尘埃


Searching

by Ming Ying

I am searching in the midst of my breaths
amongst the jigsaw puzzle pieces
inside the long-forgotten maze

Oh, even I am passing by with a lantern in my hand
I still would not see one dust particle clearly



鱼说

作者:黄锡锋

我想说出一条河流的清澈
谁知,一张口全是一个个泡泡


Fish Said

by Huang Xifeng

I wanted to express the cleanliness of a river
but who knows why, only bubbles coming out of my mouth



包青天

作者:蓝天一嘘         

脸越黑,额头的月亮就越明
可那个天依然被青包着

一群群冤魂,从这个山头跪到那个山头
跪出一片苍翠,层峦叠嶂,呼为江山


Justice Bao

by Lantian Yixu

The darker the face looks, the brighter the moon on his forehead
but the sky is still covered by the bluish

groups of innocent ghosts, walking on their knees crossing hilltops
waking up green fields and winding mountains, called territory



黑板

作者:刘小文

写一遍是白
擦一遍是黑

许多事  越擦越黑
最后,只剩下一块板
与一地的灰



Blackboard

by Liu Xiaowen

white when being written
black when being wiped off

lots of things, getting worse when trying to cover up
until at last, left barely a board
and ashes on the ground     
        (母语英美者理解:当你尝试隐瞒/掩盖许多事情时,往往要在最后,只剩下一地的灰,与一块板
时,这些事情才会逐渐变好/向好/利好/止损)



草民是这样的

作者:故乡香

冲锋在前、撤退在后、上去跟鬼子拚刺刀拚命、没怕过

支援国家、自觉勒紧裤腰带、跟饿鬼过招三年
没怨过

被城管、计生办、拆迁办、信访办追得磕头求饶
硬是没伸出半个小指头


The Grassroots Are Like This

by Guxiang Xiang

fought at forefront but withdrew at last, also attended bayonet fight, never feared

supporting the country, tightened belt to fight hunger for three years
never complained

however begging on their knees when persecuted by government offices
namingly Urban Admin, Population Control, House Demolishing, Letters and Visits
never pointed even a half-extended pinky finger


历史

作者:记住忘记

被虎狼赶逐的羊
跑成一杆猎枪


History

by Jizhu Wangji

Those Sheep, running after them are tigers and wolves   
shaping up the form of a hunting rifle    (1. 二词重复“ 选一即可”;2.running after them不可做主语 = chinglish;3. 本文体谓语缺失 )



选择

作者:方世开

走什么路至关重要啊
因为选择错误,中游的黄河
连累它的上游,也被叫成黄河


Choice

by Fang Shikai

Vital which road to take
Due to wrong choice, midstream of The Yellow River
implicated its upstream, also called The Yellow River
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地板
发表于 2018-12-9 19:54 | 只看该作者


寻找

作者:明柍

我从呼吸中寻找
从散落的拼图里
从遗失的迷宫里

即使我提着灯穿过呵
也无法辨析一粒尘埃


Searching

by Ming Ying

I am searching in the midst of my breaths
amongst the jigsaw puzzle pieces
inside the long-forgotten maze

Oh, even I am passing by with a lantern in my hand
I still would not see one dust particle clearly



鱼说

作者:黄锡锋

我想说出一条河流的清澈
谁知,一张口全是一个个泡泡


Fish Said

by Huang Xifeng

I wanted to express the cleanliness of a river
but who knows why, only bubbles coming out of my mouth



包青天

作者:蓝天一嘘         

脸越黑,额头的月亮就越明
可那个天依然被青包着

一群群冤魂,从这个山头跪到那个山头
跪出一片苍翠,层峦叠嶂,呼为江山


Justice Bao

by Lantian Yixu

The darker the face looks, the brighter the moon on his forehead
but the sky is still covered by the bluish

groups of innocent ghosts, walking on their knees crossing hilltops
waking up green fields and winding mountains, called territory



黑板

作者:刘小文

写一遍是白
擦一遍是黑

许多事  越擦越黑
最后,只剩下一块板
与一地的灰


Blackboard

by Liu Xiaowen

white when being written
black when being wiped off

lots of things, getting worse when trying to cover up
until at last, left barely a board
and ashes on the ground



草民是这样的

作者:故乡香

冲锋在前、撤退在后、上去跟鬼子拚刺刀拚命、没怕过

支援国家、自觉勒紧裤腰带、跟饿鬼过招三年
没怨过

被城管、计生办、拆迁办、信访办追得磕头求饶
硬是没伸出半个小指头


The Grassroots Are Like This

by Guxiang Xiang

fought at forefront but withdrew at last, also attended bayonet fight, never feared

supporting the country, tightened belt to fight hunger for three years
never complained

however begging on their knees when persecuted by government offices
namingly Urban Admin, Population Control, House Demolishing, Letters and Visits
never pointed even a half-extended pinky finger


历史

作者:记住忘记

被虎狼赶逐的羊
跑成一杆猎枪


History

by Jizhu Wangji

Those Sheep, running after them are tigers and wolves
shaping up the form of a hunting rifle



选择

作者:方世开

走什么路至关重要啊
因为选择错误,中游的黄河
连累它的上游,
也被叫成黄河


Choice

by Fang Shikai

Vital which road to take (英美人理解:这样的路,选得至关重要)
Due to wrong choice, midstream of The Yellow River
implicated its upstream, also called The Yellow River
(英美人理解:因为选择错误,中游的黄河
连累它的上游,中游的黄河也被叫成黄河)


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