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The Poem That Took The Place Of A Mountain
____ Wallace - Stevens（ USA / 1879 -1955）
《 修 诗 抵 修 山 》
____ 华莱士 · 史蒂文斯（ 美 / 1879 -1955）
There it was, word for word, ( 文笔升华难, 多改出好文 ) 一字，一字，一字字... ...
The poem that took the place of a mountain. 看哪，修诗篇，堪抵修青山。
He breathed its oxygen, ( 自信自强笔耕不辍不甘平庸 ) 啊，这山但凡有氧在，汲取，汲取，
Even when the book lay turned in the dust of his table. 纵我诗宅沉沦书山里。
It reminded him how he had needed ( 知不足而自反非困而不学, 调整重组字词 } 看，囧境鸣预警，困顿催启程，
A place to go to in his own direction, 遍山松柏亟待， 要我重作安排，
How he had recomposed the pines, ( 不落俗套克服困难写出特色出奇制胜 ) 快 , 我应独辟蹊径，我该特色前行，
Shifted the rocks and picked his way among clouds, 快 , 我须调岩整石择路，我要穿越层层迷雾，
For the outlook that would be right, ( 力争完美至美不胜言耐读者发挥想象) 快呀 , 向着理想，攀缘，向着完美，攀缘，
Where he would be complete in an unexplained completion: 我的愿景她，要巧夺天工，妙不可言：
The exact rock where his inexactness-es (要妙笔连珠浅尝不止知难而进) 啊，我的愿景啊，要瑕疵变妙笔，要败笔成景观
Would discover, at last, the view toward which they had edged, 匠心创意呀——砺璞成玉！完美精湛——
Where he could lie and, gazing down at the sea, ( 力争独占头出类拔萃众望所归) Oh，看吧，我终将傲岸书山诗海，
Recognize his unique and solitary home. Ye，唯我独领风骚家园！
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发表于 2018-8-13 20:47
